Slice 3:Friday Haiku

Eyes close and open

The weekend begins at last

A long week has passed.


3 Comments Add yours

  1. Tani Brown says:

    I love how you put so much emotion into this haiku. Great storytelling!


  2. I totally understand your sentiment! I’ve totally begun to understand why they call it Fri-Yay! 🙂 I love how you show the passing of time in in that first line! Yes – you’ve made it through another long week! Thank you for sharing!


  3. Lovely haiku. I feel the fresh air of relief that the weekend brings.


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